But from the park scene, the english became really difficult again. There are still some careless mistakes (I' am for I am or I'm, realy for really, pice for piece.). The english clearly improved in the old version. Become a freshman attending Minerva Bay College, romance girls and. There's a problem with Nicole's parting hair in the fast food scene depending on how she moves her head. FreshWomen is a choice-driven adult Visual Novel focusing on the best parts of life. On the lips too, it isn't that attractive if it's too glossy. A dedicated hub for creators and talented individuals to connect, collaborate, and grow their adult gaming projects.
#Co freshgirls f95 skin
If you put too much, the skin looks like plastic (especially Chloe and Rebecca during the truth or dare game). CO FreshGirls Version 0.5. Try to diversify even if it's just a hand, a leg or the head.īe careful with the light on the characters, particularly on the face. The animations are good but repetitive (forward and backward). The same with the choices : it's great that you added more options in the old version but it's hard to read light grey on white. Speaking of first name, the color of some of them is so light that it's hard to read it. You can just write "waitress" in the fast food scene if you don't want to give her a name yet. The punching guy aside, you exchange your number with a guy but you don't know his name and the "boyfriend" in the library, even though he's just there for the quarrel, he is close enough with the girl for them to talk using their first name. You forgot to name the boys outside Dylen. The inscription at the gym shouldn't be done in the middle of the training room but at the counter (even using a computer).
I maintain what I said about the pace being too fast and the sex scenes too early but you managed to rebalance that with the new content. If you're going to skip a day, at last show the classroom and write something like "this school day went by smoothly or without particular problem" because "afternoon of the following day in the haven park" feels distant and don't help immersion in the story. You're continuing the worldbuilding and introducing new characters. This game is about Hermione About the same Hermione whom we all love so much and who so undeservedly ended up in the second role. I tried this new version, even some content I didn't try last time due to the bad english.
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